为了让吐槽更集中一些，我就把那贴删了，把那首On My Own放到这里来

On my own 孤身行
Pretending he's beside me 佯装你与我一起
All alone, I walk with him till morning 两条影 一路漫步至黎明
Without him 伊人离
I feel his arms around me 觉双臂环我更紧
And when I lose my way I close my eyes 我若是迷了路 一闭上眼睛
And he has found me 他现于梦境
In the rain the pavement shines like silver 淅沥间 人行道镶满白银
All the lights are misty in the river 街灯间 川流雾雨倒影
In the darkness, the trees are full of starlight 临近夜阑 枝头上挂满繁星
And all I see is him and me for ever and forever 映入眼帘 是我们俩 结同心 不分离
And I know it's only in my mind 怎不知 一切仅显于幻境
That I'm talking to myself and not to him 不过在自言自语 他没听
And although I know that he is blind 我深知 这份情无回应
Still I say, there's a way for us 然我信 会柳暗花明
I love him 独爱伊
But when the night is over 一旦是微光黎明
He is gone, the river's just a river 伊人去 川流平常无异
Without him the world around me changes 伊人离 世界再无熟悉
The trees are bare and everywhere 秃枝木 尽遍布嶙峋
The streets are full of strangers 人群光怪而陆离
I love him 独爱伊
But every day I'm learning 然每天越发明晰
All my life I've only been pretending 纵一生 我始终不过演戏
Without me his world will go on turning 我若去 他的世界翻天覆地
A world that's full of happiness 那世界 快乐撒满地
That I have never known! 我却未曾亲历
I love him 独爱伊
I love him 独爱伊
I love him 独爱伊
But only on my own. 伊人了无回应

17楼的译配，文字很雅，但是不太合适。
首先大量的“伊人”、“伊”不太符合现代人的措辞，容易让人听了不知所云。其次，Eponine尽管识字能看懂简单的书信，可也毕竟是混迹街头的底层少女，歌词如此文雅，不符合其形象啊。

大家的点评我都听进去了，试着译配一下简单的LOOK DOWN试试，试试完全白话，能不能有那种效果
Look down look Down别看 上边
Don't Look 'em in the eye那双眼尖又尖
Look down look down别留 期盼
You're here until you die这基本是阴间
No God above上帝 不见
And Hell alone below脚下无尽深渊
Look down look down算算 时间
There's twenty years to go还剩下二十年
I've done no wrong我本 有冤
Sweet Jesus hear my prayer耶稣你快听见
Look down look down那你 自便
Sweet Jesus doesn't care神根本听不见
I know she'll wait她不 会变
I know that she'll be true她不会也叛变
Look down look down是你 犯贱
They've all forgotten you没人会那么贱
When I get free我要逃离
You won't see me别怪我急
Here by dust一日千里
Look down look downn一进 牢里
You'll always be a slave你永远是奴隶
Look down look down你在这里
You're standing in your grave一半在坟墓里

高手啊，要One Day More

就下面链接的专辑里，都能找到上面提到的几首歌的中文演唱版，与楼主和楼上各位的版本互相借鉴吧

我来顶起来啊

马

试着翻译一下，呵呵

I love him 爱满怀
I love him 心凄迷
I love him 意迷离
But only on my own. 终究只是梦一回

Look down look Down 低下头啊低下头啊
Don'tLook 'em in the eye 躲开他们的眼
Lookdown look down 低下头啊低下头啊
You'rehere until you die 躲不开你的死神
No Godabove 上帝已经死了
AndHell alone below 只能进地狱
Lookdown look down 看看哪老天哪
There'stwenty years to go 还要挣扎二十年
I'vedone no wrong 我没做错什么啊
SweetJesus hear my prayer 上帝你听听我心声
Lookdown look down 问他，何用
Sweet Jesus doesn't care 他根本听不见
I knowshe'll wait 爱人还在等我
I knowthat she'll be true 情意我心知
Lookdown look down 这，怎可能
They'veall forgotten you 她早已忘记你
When Iget free 若得自由
Youwon't see me 离开这里
Hereby dust 再也不回头
Lookdown look down 想想吧，看清楚，
You'llalways be a slave 你将永世为奴
Lookdown look down 想想吧，看清楚了，
You'restanding in your grave一你活在坟墓里

Empty Chairs at Empty Tables(from Les Miserables)
空空的桌椅
There'sa grief that can't be spoken. 说不出的悲愤和心酸
There'sa pain goes on and on. 一次又一次的伤痛
Emptychairs at empty tables 空空的桌椅边没有人啊
Now myfriends are dead and gone. 我的朋友们已经逝去
Herethey talked of revolution. 他们在这里憧憬革命
Hereit was they lit the flame. 他们在这里点燃火种
Herethey sang about `tomorrow' 他们也曾慷慨高歌
Andtomorrow never came. 可他们再也看不到明天
Fromthe table in the corner 促膝坐在角落的桌边
Theycould see a world reborn 向往着一个新世界
Andthey rose with voices ringing 他们响亮的声音
I canhear them now! 依然回荡在耳边
Thevery words that they had sung 那天他们说过的话
Becametheir last communion 竟然是最后的诀别
On thelonely barricade at dawn. 在那个黎明中最后的街垒
Oh myfriends, my friends forgive me 哦，朋友啊，请原谅我还活着
That Ilive and you are gone. 你们去了另一个世界
There'sa grief that can't be spoken. 说不出的悲愤和心酸
There'sa pain goes on and on. 一次又一次的伤痛
Phantom faces at the window. 窗内映出你们的脸庞
Phantomshadows on the floor. 门上布满你们的身影
Emptychairs at empty tables 空空的桌椅边没有人啊
Wheremy friends will meet no more. 朋友们再也不能相聚
Oh myfriends, my friends, don't ask me 哦我的朋友们啊，别问我
Whatyour sacrifice was for 你们的牺牲带来了什么
Emptychairs at empty tables 空空的桌椅边再也没有人
Where my friends will sing nomore. 和我唱那些难忘的歌