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这里新人,成都初二妹纸一只~只会写词,而且由于中午表达能力严重退化,所以只有用英文惹...而且毕竟初二的词汇量太小了,所以真心写不出来什么好东西...求大神谱曲...


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这是本人第一首,去年年底的时候写的...
The Lonely place
There used to be so much fun
Dreaming about someday you will come
And give me a warm hug.
But now I'm here looking around
Thinking about what I got
That's just so sad.
The room goes cold
And it's getting hard to hold.
Trough the windows
All I can see is just empty streets
Spinning there I get nothing sweet.
So I close my eyes
To see your smile with the sunshine.
In the lonly place I'm praying
You will back and say "hi".
There are still so many dreams
About e-ve-rything
About you and me.
Althought now I'm crying
I gotta keep trying
And I'm not gonna stop it.
Cos I just can't forget that something
Like how much you made it enchating.
Trough the windows
All I can see is just empty streets
Spinning there I get nothing sweet.
So I close my eyes
To see your smile with the sunshine.
In the lonly place I'm praying
You will back and say "hi".
Baby I don't expect much
Only wish you can back to me
I know we couldn't never be
But your face is what I need to see
But right now through the windows
All I can see is just empty streetsSpinning there I get nothing sweet.
So I close my eyes
To see your smile with the sunshine.
In the lonly place I'm praying
With your smile in my mind


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第二首
Sitting on the floor,crying as a fool.
I never thought it will be like this before.
If only you could see,about all of my feelings.
If only you could understand what my words mean.
You're the only thing can take my breath away.
And you're the only one can make me say:
"Baby I know love is pain.
But I'd love to get hurt for you.
Even if it messes up my whole life.
I just really really do.
In another word,
I love you."
Lying in the night,draming all my life.
The smile you left for me is always this bright.
Have already known that you've already gone.
But sadly,I'm still here to hold.
Cos you're the only thing can take my breath away.
And you're the only one can make me say:
"Baby I know love is pain.
But I'd love to get hurt for you.
Even if it messes up my whole life.
I just really really do.
In another word,
I love you."
Yeah this is only a little unrequited love.
And it's enough to break my heart.
This is not the way it should be.
Don't want to believe the truth I've seen.
There are so many wounds inside me...
Now I know what means "love is pain".
But I'd love to get hurt for you.
Even the good things are never gonna happened to me.
I just really really do.
In another word,
I love you.
I just need to say that:
"I love you..."


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又一首
There's something you just can't write down
Cos you're afraid of teardrop.
There's something you just cannot say
You don't even know do you mean it.
You're alone in the dark
Let the memories come again.
Although those words he said
Really brought you so much pain.
Can't stop can't get back
Now you're on this way.
Prentending there's nothing to regret
Because it always be you to blame.
But you just want to get over inside
Been trying to turn this page.
In your eyes he is still this special.
But some feelings are just gone.
And you don't understand how can he become this cold
It's not the boy you thought you know.
And everything he does is hide
You don't even know why.
Can't stop can't get back
Now you're on this way.
Prentending there's nothing to regret
Because it always be you to blame.
But you just want to get over inside
Been trying to turn this page.
Something just breaks your heart and hurts your soul
Makes you to be that low
You're too weak to let go...
It can almost called the only thing now you know...
Whatever you gotta keep keep going on
Keep keep going down.
Until the one come
And save you from
Where you thought you belong...
Now you're on this way.
Prentending there's nothing to regret
Because it always be you to blame.
You just want to get over inside
Been trying to turn this page.
But you gotta keep going on...[THE END]


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Last night in my dreams
You were there smiling at me
I can't hardly breath
The moment I made it be
Your eyes were saying"I won't run away"
I knew it was true & that feeling will never fade
I followed your steps wherever you go
Your laughters warmed my heart and soul
Then the music started
We just sung along
Baby you put your arms around me
Kissed me that way I can still feel it
Dancing round and round
Nothing could turn us apart
Through those dreams I see
What I wish we to be
This morning I woke up
Couldn't believe the dance have stopped
Scared me that I feel so in love
Praying I could back it to the clock
So that I will see your face again
The songs for us will never end
Then the music startedWe just sung along
Baby you put your arms around me
Kissed me that way I can still feel it
Dancing round and round
Nothing could turn us apart
Through those dreams I see
What I wish we to be
I wonder why
It seemed so real
Much more than words could discribe
The way it made me feel
When the music started
We just sung along
Baby you put your arms around me
Kissed me that way I can still feel it
Dancing round and round
Nothing could turn us apart
Through those dreams I see
What I wish we to be
And maybe it could only happen
In my dreams
Hope tonight I can meet you again
In my lovely dreams


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