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【翻译】Lala的短篇翻译楼

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作为一个懒货+英死早所以专注短篇十二年,因为短篇单独发贴太浪费太多所以决定开个楼。
最近作业多成山,尽量做到周更吧,不过不会弃坑。
学术不精,如果有错误还请谅解~
这里是完全没有存在感的Lala(打成汉字的话记得带口字旁!)(* ̄▽ ̄)y


1楼2015-01-25 16:22回复
    刚翻完的,还热乎着~~~~
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    I Sat On The Bus
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    I sat on the bus, on my way to school.
    我乘着公交车,正在去学校的路上。
    Listening to music, and paying little to no attention to the other students.
    我一边听着音乐,一边观察着其他的学生。
    At one of the stops my mind snapped back to reality.
    汽车停靠时,我的思维被拉回了现实。
    I looked towards the small house. Tommy’s house, I thought.
    我看向一座小房子。“那是Tommy家。”我想。
    A hand slipped through the drapes of the window and waved the bus driver to move on.
    一只手从窗帘中伸出,挥动着示意司机离开。
    ‘He’s sick’, I thought, paying no large amount of attention to the situation.
    “他大概病了吧。”我暗自想到,没有太在意。
    The day flew by.
    一天很快过去了。
    I watched the local news channel after school, and what I heard paralyzed me.
    当我放学后看了本地的新闻频道后,我僵住了。
    Tommy’s entire family was murdered that day by an unknown suspect.
    Tommy全家都被不知名的凶手杀害了。
    After hearing this news, I moved back up to my room and quietly fell asleep.
    听到这个消息后,我回到自己的房间,安静的入睡。
    ——————————————-
    The next day, I sat on the bus.
    第二天,我坐上公交车。
    We drove past Tommy’s house and the bus driver, unaware of Tommy’s families fate, stopped at his home.
    我们驶过Tommy的家,但司机并不知道Tommy家的厄运,依然停靠在了他家门口。
    As I was about to get up and explain to her what had happened, something caught my eye.
    当我准备站起来,告诉她发生了什么时,一些东西吸引了我的目光。
    A pale hand slipped through the drapes of the window, and waved the bus driver to move on.
    一只手从窗帘中伸出,挥动着示意司机离开。
    I sat on the bus, terrified.
    我坐在车上,感觉糟透了。


    2楼2015-01-25 16:23
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      这个是以前的黑历史,说实话我到现在都没看懂……
      Sweet Music
      http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Sweet_Music
      我一直十分喜欢音乐,尤其是钢琴。自从我记事起我家的客厅就放着一架华丽的黑钢琴。我几乎每天都要抽时间弹上一曲。它的声音实在是太美妙动听了。
      但最近我不时的会听到那架钢琴美妙的旋律,虽然我并没有碰它。无论我是在公园,在商店,它都会响起。
      大概一周后,我注意到自从我脑袋里回荡钢琴的旋律以后,有些奇怪事情很快便发生了,比较特别的是有人死去了。新闻比以前更频繁的播出关于有人被不明杀手刺死的报道。我对此感到很兴奋,我似乎有了某种超能力。
      但很快,当我接近朋友和家人时,那旋律便开始回响。不久之后,我所在意的人几乎都死了。
      几分钟之前,我发现我的父母死在了他们的卧室里。我看到地上有一串血脚印从尸体延伸到我这里。事实上,它们在我所站的地方终止了。我又一次听到了那钢琴的声音,它在召唤我。
      现在,它将不会再响起来了。


      3楼2015-01-25 16:27
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        依然黑历史,神叨叨的一篇……
        7 Minutes/7分钟
        http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/7_Minutes
        如果你曾经有过濒死的经历,你的眼前也许出现过“走马灯”。我问过一些人关于这个情况。他们说那就像是在一秒钟走过了自己的一辈子。这并不是很难做到,你的大脑喜欢回避压力,所以它懒得处理面对死亡的问题。因此如果你的大脑认为你要挂了,它会用最简单的方法逃走:回忆。所以当一切都要结束时,你的大脑会播放你所有的记忆。
        如果你的大脑完整的话,它会在你死后继续存活七分钟。所以如果有一个人七分钟而且可以用一秒钟经历一生,每分钟就是60个人。7分钟就是420个人。这可是很长的时间和海量的死亡经历。
        那么你还剩下多少时间呢?


        4楼2015-01-25 16:28
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          默默的滚回去与政治相爱相杀(好想看纸牌屋啊哭),下周期末考试只能靠想象力做题的感觉……


          6楼2015-01-25 16:55
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            可以看出楼主在翻译时注意了语言的通顺性,这一点我很喜欢!好评
            不过其实集合贴不太便于阅览。因为看标题完全不知道里面是什么,无法找到具体的故事。
            有少量的细节建议修整下,不过应该是粗心导致的,稍微注意就好~加油!


            IP属地:广东来自iPhone客户端8楼2015-01-26 19:48
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              终于有时间更新啦~~~


              9楼2015-01-31 12:36
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                Predator/Prey 捕食者/捕食
                After a night of carousing with his buddies, Billy was ready to head home.
                在和小伙伴们狂欢了一整夜之后,Billy准备回家。
                “Are you sure you want to walk home by yourself?” asked Todd, “You’ve heard the rumors, right?”
                “你确定你想自己走回家吗?”Todd问道,“你听过那个传闻,对吧?”
                “What rumors?” ask Billy.
                “什么传闻?”Billy问道。
                “You know, the problem…with vampires.” He said that last word almost in a whisper.
                “你知道的,那些……吸血鬼。”他几乎用细不可闻的声音说出那个名字。
                “Oh God! Really? I can’t believe you’re taking that seriously.”
                “哦,天!真的吗?我不敢相信你是认真的。”
                “Why shouldn’t I?”
                “为什么?”
                “Because it’s ridiculous, that’s why! I need to scoot. It’s so late, the sun’s almost up.”
                “因为它太荒谬了,这就是原因!我要赶路了,太晚了,太阳都快升起来了。”
                Todd shrugged. “Suit yourself, but if you get killed tonight, don’t say I didn’t warn ya.”
                Todd耸耸肩,“随便你,但如果你今晚被杀了,可别说我没警告你。”
                “I won’t say anything! I’ll be dead!” Billy called back as he started walking. The echoing laughter from the guys made him smile.
                “我什么都不会说的!我就要挂了!”Billy临走之前回答道,其他人的笑声让他感到很得意。


                10楼2015-01-31 12:36
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                  He hadn’t been walking long when he heard something rustling in the dark. He stopped and looked around. The noise also stopped. He cursed his own paranoia and continued, but he couldn’t shake that…feeling. A moment later, he heard it again, louder. His fear turned to anger.
                  没走多久,他就听到黑暗中传来沙沙声。他停下脚步环顾四周,那个声音也停了下来。他咒骂自己的偏执的想法,然后继续赶路,但他没法摆脱那种……感觉。不一会儿,他又听到了那种声音,而且更加明显。他的恐惧变成了恼怒。


                  11楼2015-01-31 12:37
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                    “谁在那儿?”他吼道,但没有人回应。他告诉自己他只是被耍了,最好的办法就是尽快回家。在他将要转身时,一个人从阴影中向他冲过来。这发生的太突然了,他没有时间去躲避那个高大的家伙如同卡车一般的撞击。当他反应过来时,一个魁梧的男人把他压制在地上,他的脸上充满了疯狂的恨意。他的眼睛里仿佛燃烧着愤怒和厌恶。
                    “Who the hell are you?” Billy demanded.
                    “你是什么玩意?”Billy问道。


                    12楼2015-01-31 12:40
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                      “Who do you think?” he said in a low, hoarse voice.
                      “你说呢?”他用低沉而嘶哑的声音说道。
                      And then, Billy knew. This was the killer everybody had been whispering about. The vampire problem wasn’t just a rumor. The man reached in his tool belt and took out two items that sent a wave of panic through Billy. He squirmed violently, but it was no use. His attacker was too strong. He shoved the wooden stake against Billy’s chest and raised the hammer high. Billy screamed in terror, his fangs glistening in the moonlight.
                      现在,Billy明白了,这就是大家都在谈论的那个杀人狂,吸血鬼问题不仅仅只是一个传闻。那个男人从工具袋里拿出两样东西,Billy感到一阵恐惧袭来。他剧烈的挣扎着,但这毫无用处,袭击他的家伙实在是太强壮了。他把木桩对准了Billy的胸口,然后高高的举起来锤子。Billy被吓得失声大叫,他的尖牙在月光下闪闪发光。
                      Credit To: E. Alan Rahn


                      13楼2015-01-31 12:41
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                        嗯楼主辛苦了。
                        其实我看到一个魁梧的大汉什么的就很激动,太基了【捂脸】


                        来自手机贴吧14楼2015-01-31 12:58
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                          嗯…这一篇的意思是Billy是吸血鬼壮汉是猎人什么的?不明觉厉xxx


                          IP属地:浙江来自Android客户端15楼2015-02-09 11:15
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                            最近作业多成狗,还要准备结课考试,喵蛋整个人都不好了,先停更一段时间,我还会回来的……


                            16楼2015-02-16 17:35
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                              这篇简直自攻自受,翻完以后笑傻了23333
                              touch
                              He and his girlfriend weren’t the most romantic couple – their idea of spicing up their relationship was making out in the dark. He came over to her house late one night, when her parents were out of town, and they lay down on her bed together. He turned off the bedside lamp, held her hands in his, and began kissing her gently. The thing about the darkness is that it heightens your other senses.
                              他和他的女朋友并不是最浪漫的一对,他们在黑暗中为自己的关系增添乐趣。一天晚上,他在她的父母离开小镇时来到她的家里,他们一起躺在床上。他关掉了床头灯,握住她的手,开始轻轻的吻她。黑暗总是能使人的感官更为灵敏。
                              The sound of her gentle breathing, beginning to quicken.
                              她轻柔的呼吸声,而且开始变快。
                              The sweet smell of perfume at the base of her neck.
                              她脖子上甜甜的香水味。
                              The taste of her lips, and the salt on her skin.
                              她嘴唇和皮肤上汗水的味道。
                              The feel of nails beginning to dig into his shoulders.
                              指甲抠进他肩膀的感觉。
                              Despite the darkness, his eyes snapped open as he realised that both her hands were still clasped firmly within his own.
                              尽管一片漆黑,但他突然睁开了眼睛,因为他发现自己的双臂正紧紧地环抱着自己。
                              Credit To – September Derleth


                              17楼2015-02-28 11:11
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