老师指出了错误，但是我不太会改，请求大佬教一下，谢谢！！！
1.But without years of daily training,none ofthem would have realized their dream or had the opportunity to j oin theOlympic Games.（老师说：是一个虚拟结构，从句里面至少是过去完成时，但是从句没有这种结构，所以主句的结构过于复杂，前后时态不一致）
2.To sum up,it is my view,wherever you want togo,only people who deeds are better than words can achieve success.（定于从句，不是who，直接引导名词）
这两句话不太会改，求大佬改一下！！万分感谢！！
1.But without years of daily training,none ofthem would have realized their dream or had the opportunity to j oin theOlympic Games.（老师说：是一个虚拟结构，从句里面至少是过去完成时，但是从句没有这种结构，所以主句的结构过于复杂，前后时态不一致）
2.To sum up,it is my view,wherever you want togo,only people who deeds are better than words can achieve success.（定于从句，不是who，直接引导名词）
这两句话不太会改，求大佬改一下！！万分感谢！！
